Friday, March 29, 2019

Elevator Pitch No. 3

Most of the pitch I needed to improve on was based around peer feedback. I was told to speak with more confidence and to solidify what the actual idea was, so I tried to emphasized these in the beginning and throughout the elevator pitch.
I tried to speak clearly and relatively slowly while explaining the two primary themes behind my idea.
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  1. Katelyn ArnoldMarch 30, 2019 at 1:15 AM

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  2. Katelyn ArnoldMarch 30, 2019 at 1:17 AM

    I think overall your pitch is great! You can tell that you have genuine interest in the product you are offering. My main pieces of advice are more "housekeeping" comments. First, I would make sure to dress somewhat professionally for pitches. Second, your video kind of cut out in the middle of a sentence at the end, so in the future I would make sure it doesn't do that. Overall, I see where you applied the feedback you received to your pitch. I could tell that you were conscious about what you wanted to say to make sure it came out clearly and concise.

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  3. iogangoApril 1, 2019 at 4:46 PM

    I think you did a great job of expressing enthusiasm in your pitch to get the audience interested and provided plenty of information in a short amount of time. I also thought your outfit choice fit in with your idea because you're trying to sell a fitness product, so it would make sense to present yourself in athletic wear to relate to your target audience.

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