Adam, I can tell you have a good idea of what you want your product to be and how it operates. You gave a lot of good information. You were animated and showed emotion about your product. I would like to make a couple of suggestions for your third elevator pitch. 1) Practice your pitch a lot beforehand, since a couple of times, it seemed as if you couldn't think of the word you wanted to say. 2) I couldn't understand the name of your product, so make sure you enunciate it clearly. 3) Start with a hook that will get people's attention. For the most part your pitch is good and it kept my attention.
Adam,
ReplyDeleteI can tell you have a good idea of what you want your product to be and how it operates. You gave a lot of good information. You were animated and showed emotion about your product. I would like to make a couple of suggestions for your third elevator pitch. 1) Practice your pitch a lot beforehand, since a couple of times, it seemed as if you couldn't think of the word you wanted to say. 2) I couldn't understand the name of your product, so make sure you enunciate it clearly. 3) Start with a hook that will get people's attention. For the most part your pitch is good and it kept my attention.